Wow Ellie this is really ‘Super!’
Star1: I like the logo/logos on either side of the title.
Star2: I like the title animation it really stands out.
Wish: The writing could be a little brighter.
This is amazing I really like the story i’m going to give you 10/10 for it. Well done Ellie.
Your story is very attention grabbing as well as it looking fabulous with the multicoloured title and the pictures are great to show some of what your story is about. I think yours are really good.
I love the story! I like the way you chose contrasting colours for your writing. Its really cool the way you made the title change colour. Its amazing!
Wow Ellie this is really ‘Super!’
Star1: I like the logo/logos on either side of the title.
Star2: I like the title animation it really stands out.
Wish: The writing could be a little brighter.
This is amazing I really like the story i’m going to give you 10/10 for it. Well done Ellie.
Your story is very attention grabbing as well as it looking fabulous with the multicoloured title and the pictures are great to show some of what your story is about. I think yours are really good.
love your story about super spiderwowman it is lovely
from Pebbles 🙂
love it Ellie you made my day from Samuel 🙂
Amazing Ellie maybe change the colour of the writing.
I love your work I can see you have worked really hard on this piece of work its truly beautiful.
Ellie you are so creative, your work is the great.
I love the story! I like the way you chose contrasting colours for your writing. Its really cool the way you made the title change colour. Its amazing!