Well done Mia I love your fireworks poem its fantastic it looks like its real. Your colours look brilliant and they match to
the picture. Its very animtional. Some good punctuation. Well done Mia.
Mia your picture is lovely and I like your colours.
I like your background and I like your border.
It would have been nice if you had coloured in the words in the appropriate colour.
from Lydia
Mia your picture is lovely.
I like your background and I like your border.
It would have been nice if you had coloured in the words in the appropriate colour.
from Lydia
good work
you have done relly good work
cool culors
cool firework
I love your work and your picture Mia. But you could put a bit more colour in it. I also like your animation!
Well done Mia I like your animation.
I like the picture you chose.
I think your letters could be more colourful.
Well done Mia I love your fireworks poem its fantastic it looks like its real. Your colours look brilliant and they match to
the picture. Its very animtional. Some good punctuation. Well done Mia.
Mia great animation picture from James.
Mia your picture is lovely and I like your colours.
I like your background and I like your border.
It would have been nice if you had coloured in the words in the appropriate colour.
from Lydia
Mia your picture is lovely.
I like your background and I like your border.
It would have been nice if you had coloured in the words in the appropriate colour.
from Lydia
I like your animation and your colour and WOW words.
I really like your colours
Your picture goes well with your poem
It would look a bit better if your writing would go with your background colour.
hi this is harry from year 6 I think your work is really good!